Here are some opening sentences from Year 6’s ‘My Favourite Holiday’ essays. The purpose of these sentences was to briefly tell the reader Where? Why? Who? The class are continuing to work on their essays: with detailed setting descriptions; information about what they did whilst on holiday and finally, a recommendation paragraph to tempt others to visit. Definitely work in progress.
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